I feel good about my first full essay in this class. I feel i did good with my commas and semi colons like this sentence ¨This is a glittering generality especially in America because The American Dream is a big positive message for people to look up to; moreover, by saying that he is the embodiment of The American Dream makes people like him.¨ I think i need to work on not capitalizing things that shouldn't be capitalized like when i kept capitalizing ethos and pathos when they were in the middle of a sentence and shouldn't be capitalized.
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